We return to our horrific tale of fanboy obsession and computer keyboard intrigue.
This is the second or third draft of this posting. It turned into a loud, bitter rant. But this should be about the story, not the noise or the foolishness that distracted from it. So let’s get back to that.
I went through a lot of wrangling to hammer out the basics of this new version. And even in the scripting change, I’m still banging on it.
Writing isn’t about perfection. Writing is about getting the ideas out. Get it all out. Out of your head. Outta yer system. Screw perfection. Put it down on the page. Do it now. All the clean-up — the tightening of bolts, the caulking of plot holes, gritting your teeth, cutting out the stuff you love but doesn’t work or moves too slow — that’s editing. Edits come later. Write it down first.
I point this out because of the shaky nature of this treatment. A synopsis is a quick sketch, summarizing the overall plot.Â An outline can be done several ways, sometimes as a list of key plot points, or a scene breakdown that narrates key events.Â A treatment is usually more detailed than all the rest, written like a short story, spelling out the drama.
If you’ve been following this blog thread from the beginning, you already know about the distractions that brought me here. Â This treatment was written under the pressure of those distractions, in the hope of stripping all the rathole ideas and audience pandering that was holding the story down.
And even with that, it’s still kinda messy.Â Writing.Â Getting the ideas out.Â So I’m going to throw in commentary, the sort of stuff people say when their place is a mess and they weren’t expecting guests.
And again, this is a Doctor Who story.Â BBC employees, writers, and producers of a nervous disposition should be mindful of this.Â But knowing that, and if you’re still interested, follow the jump: Continue reading “Treatment: “Proteus Rising””